The graph below shows the fertility rate of women in different Gulf countries from 1990 and 2000

The graph below shows the fertility rate of women in different Gulf countries from 1990 and 2000
The graph outlines the fertility number of
female
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females
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in different 6 countries
Bahrain
Kuwait
, Qatar, Omon, S.
Arabia
and UAE between 1990 and 2000. Looking
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overall
perspective it is readily apparent that 2 countries Oman and S.
Arabia
  were predominant in both
of
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years
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while
the figures of
Bahrain
and
Kuwait
faced a downward trend.
At the end
of the 10 years in
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rate of women Oman remained predominant followed by S.
Arabia
, Qatar, UEA,
Kuwait
and
Bahrain
. In 1990, the figure of Oman started the period meaningfully higher than other countries in fertility before taking a nosedive to nearly 5.5 in 2000.
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that time S.
Arabia
was
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level and it showed little fluctuation of  1  decline in 2000.
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the figures 
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Qatar and UAE were 4.5 and 4 respectively, 
then
they dropped  marginally
3.5
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and 3 over the given period of time.
Bahrain
and
Kuwait
 
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observed a significant dwindle despite remaining less popular in both years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words bahrain, kuwait, arabia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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