It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is important to make some risky moves in

career

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your career

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as well as

in

personal

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your personal

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life.

Although

this

may harm a person in the short term, it allows them to create new

opportunities

and I believe

this

advantage far outweighs any potential disadvantages. Making a risky move may hurt a person short term. Take,

for example

, adults who are psychologically controlled by their parents because they still receive financial support from them. If they stop relying on their parents so that they can be free to go after their dreams, they may face the short-term downside of losing the comfort their parents’ money provides. The same can be true for making a career change that involves a big pay cut.

However

, I do not think that a short-term sacrifice should be seen as a major disadvantage in life because it can pay off greatly in the long run. On the positive side, risks bring

opportunities

.

For instance

, if Priscilla Chan’s grandparents hadn’t been courageous enough to move to the US from Vietnam, Chan wouldn’t have had the opportunity to study at Harvard, let alone meet and marry Mark Zuckerberg. If Mark Zuckerberg hadn’t dropped out of Harvard to focus on building Facebook, it could have probably been another platform, rather than Facebook, that became the world’s biggest social media giant. I think that

opportunities

like these are extremely important because they can be life-changing. In conclusion,

although

taking risks may harm people in the short term, I believe

this

downside is greatly outweighed by the upside that the risks they take can create life-changing

opportunities

for them.