The chart below gives information about the journeys to school by children aged 11 to 16 in the UK in a year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates data in regards to school
journey
used by kids aged 11-16 years in a year. The units of measurement are given in percentages.
Fix the agreement mistake
journeys
Overall
, high
number of learners walked for shorter Change the article
a high
the high
distances
whereas
majority
used buses to cover long Correct article usage
the majority
distances
but not short distances
. Also
, some students used bicycles and cars as a means of transport to their respective schools.
First of all, out of the four given major means of transport, in 0-1 miles
learners prefered
to utilize their energy to walk in school which is 90% rather than using any other transportation means. For 1-2 Correct your spelling
preferred
miles
coverage 75% used bicycles, 0
-1 mile and 2-5 Correct word choice
and 0
miles
was
50% and 49% respectively. There was only 20% in the vehicle usage for 1-2 Correct subject-verb agreement
were
miles
and 21% for over 5 miles
.
Additionally
, as far as buses
utility was concerned, it was used by 1% of students for shorter Change the noun form
bus
miles
and nearly 69 per cent for over 5 miles
distances
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