The pie charts show the size of classes in primary schools in four states in Australia in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts compare the total quantity of
students
per class in primary schools in four states
of Australia
, namely New South Wales, South Australia
, Australia
Capital Territory
, and Western Australia
in the year of
2010.
From an Change preposition
apply
overall
perspective, Australia
's primary classes
were mainly under 25 students
and the more-than-30-student classes
were least common across all states
.
Firstly
, looking at classes
with 30 students
and more, the figures for those were 1% in Correct article usage
the Australia
Australia
Capital Change noun form
Australia's
territory
Capitalize word
Territory
,
and 4-5% in three other Remove the comma
apply
states
. Secondly
, in terms of 26-to-30-student class
, Fix the agreement mistake
classes
these kind
of Change the determiner
this kind
these kinds
classes
came the
second least popular size in New South Wales and Western Change preposition
as the
Australia
with 33% and 27%, respectively while
in Correct article usage
the Autralia
Autralia
Capital Correct your spelling
Australia
Australian
Territory
, this
category made up just one tenth
.
The Add a hyphen
one-tenth
classes
with 21 to 25 members accounted for the highest proportion in almost states
, Correct determiner usage
all states
however
, South Australia
was the exception at that time with just one third
. Add a hyphen
one-third
Other
Change the wording
Another
favorite
class Change the spelling
favourite
size
was less than 20 Fix the agreement mistake
sizes
students
, which occupied a good percentage of 38% and 36% in Correct article usage
the Australia
Australia
Capital Correct your spelling
Australian
Territory
and South Australia
, respectively, and a quarter in New South Wales and Wastern
Correct your spelling
Western
Australia
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