The map displays the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The map gives information about changes in
Ryemouth
from 1995 to now.
Overall
, Ryemouth
did not experience significant differences.
At first glance, we can say that the village had had a huge forest park and farmland previously, whereas
, today Ryemouth
have a new tennis court and golf area
instead
of that. Also
, it had a seaport in the year 1995 when it comes today it does not have a new venue furthermore
, a fish market and cafe were built in 1995, however
they were removed because a restaurant and hotel were constructed. Add the comma(s)
however,
Besides
, all housing area
was located in the western of the Ryemouth
in 1995 also
they remain nowadays in the sample location.
Finally
, we can observe that local residents of Ryemouth
do not have sufficient green areas and they could find a park area
for their vehicles , today the Ryemouth
residents have a park area
which is located near the hotel.Submitted by kickbox191 on
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