The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.
The diagram depicts the process of manufacturing instant
noodles
with 8 steps
.
To begin
with, the flour of storage siles is sent to a factory by cous. After arriving at the factory, flour is mixed with water and oil, and delivered by the rollers to become the dough sheets. Next,
the sheets are divided into strips and then
sequenced into a circle.
Subsequently
, the noodle discs are cooked with oil and drought. Then
, they are put into cups with some vegetables and spices. After these steps
, the cups of noodles
are labelled and sealed, ultimately being sent to sell.
Overall
, this
manufactory has a specific flour process and can be divided into three steps
, namely delivering, shaping, and packing. Firstly
, the flout is sent to the factory, steered with water and oil, and becomes a mixer. Secondly
, the mixer is shaped by steps
3 to 5, thereby becoming noodles
. Eventually, noodles
are put into cups with labels and sent out.Submitted by daniellin0717 on
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