The graph below shows the nuber of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

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information

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about the

number

of people who had come to

burnaby

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Burnaby

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public Library to read books from 2011 to 2014,

that

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has been categorised into two genders.

Firstly

, there is

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a comparison

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between two genders including men and women. Generally reading, of books by men more than women.

Number

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A number

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of male

readers

rose gradually which is (

approximatly

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approximately

3000) to 4000 between

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2011 to 2012.

Then

contiuned

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continued

rocketed from 4000 in 2013 to 14000 in 2014. The

number

of male

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are

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likely to increase

further

.

Secondly

,

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the number

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of female

readers

increased

steadly

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steadily

from 5000 in 2011 to 10000 in 2013.

By contrast

, the

number

of female

readers

plummeted from 10000 to 7000 between

in

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2013 to 2014. Unfortunately

number

of female

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hit a peak

was

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in 2013, it is 10000. In

additionally

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, these two

readers

who has

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declined since 2013 for

woman

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women

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,

while

men's

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men

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have jumped more than twofold.