The graph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007.
The line
graph
gives detailed information about the Use synonyms
consumption
of three different dairy products, namely Use synonyms
margarine
, low fat & reduced spreads, and Use synonyms
butter
, over a period from 1981 to 2007. All units are measured in grams (Use synonyms
gr
).
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Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
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while
the trends of Linking Words
margarine
Use synonyms
consumption
and Use synonyms
butter
Use synonyms
consumption
underwent downward trends, that of low fat & reduced spreads Use synonyms
consumption
witnessed upward trends. Use synonyms
Additionally
, it is Linking Words
also
worth mentioning that the most significant change in the amount of Linking Words
consumption
was seen in Use synonyms
butter
Use synonyms
consumption
, Use synonyms
although
the highest records in the Linking Words
graph
belong to it.
Regarding the figures that decreased throughout the period, in 1981, Use synonyms
butter
was consumed at just over 140 Use synonyms
gr
, Use synonyms
whereas
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margarine
was consumed at around 90 Use synonyms
gr
. Use synonyms
Following
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this
, the Linking Words
figure
for Use synonyms
butter
decreased sharply till the end of the period and ended with just over 50 Use synonyms
gr
, after rising markedly to just under 160 Use synonyms
gr
(the highest Use synonyms
figure
in the Use synonyms
graph
) in 1986. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Linking Words
while
the Linking Words
figure
for Use synonyms
margarine
went up and was responsible for 100 Use synonyms
gr
between 1991 and 1996, it Use synonyms
also
went down significantly and ended with 40 Linking Words
gr
in 2007 (it is notable that the figures shared the same spots in 1991).
When it comes to the intake of low fat & reduced spreads, it began to be eaten in 1996, and it accounted for about 10 Use synonyms
gr
(the lowest Use synonyms
figure
in the given Use synonyms
graph
). Use synonyms
Next,
it increased strikingly in 2001 and reached over 80 Linking Words
gr
, before decreasing to nearly 70 Use synonyms
gr
in the final year (it is obvious that low fat & reduced spreads and Use synonyms
margarine
were consumed at the same amount in 2001).Use synonyms
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