The diagram below shows changes in modes of transport chosen by travellers in a European country from 1950 to 1990. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.ะน
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The bar chart indicates
about
changes in Change preposition
apply
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the catergories
catergories
of transport in Europe by Correct your spelling
categories
traveller
between 1950 and 1990.
Fix the agreement mistake
travellers
Overall
, it is clear to see that number of peoples who chosen travel
by foot
is dropped when compear with a year before. However
, average
of travellers who Correct article usage
the average
chose
Wrong verb form
choose
car
is Correct article usage
a car
significant
Change the word
significantly
rise in
every Wrong verb form
rising
years
. Change to a singular noun
year
While
, rates of increase and decrease are so similar.
To begin
with, in a
year Change the article
the
Change preposition
apply
of
1950 Change preposition
apply
Correct article usage
the foot
foot
Correct article usage
the foot
is
Wrong verb form
was
Correct article usage
the most
most
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the most
poppular choise
of travellers about 40% of visitors. On the Correct your spelling
popular choice
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contrary
contary
just only 5% of Add a comma
contary,
tourist
chose Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
Fix the infinitive
to travels
travels
by Correct subject-verb agreement
travel
car
. But in 1970 travel
by car
is more famous with the approxiemately 25% of the tourist standard and the rate of European tourists choosing to travel
by foot
has fall slightly. The larges
chance is in Correct your spelling
largest
1990
year, Change the article
the 1990
travel
by car
is in
demand than Correct quantifier usage
more in
other
Correct quantifier usage
any other
choice
with around 41% of visitors Change the wording
choices
choose
it Wrong verb form
choosing
on
the other hand, Add the comma(s)
, on
scale
of Add an article
the scale
peoples
who selected Fix the agreement mistake
people
travel
by foot
is only 6%.
Although
, in 1950 several of tourists Correct word choice
However
who
picked Correct pronoun usage
apply
Fix the infinitive
to travels
travels
by bike is more than Correct subject-verb agreement
travel
bus
is close to 30% and Change preposition
by bus
average
of Add an article
an average
the average
peoples
who Fix the agreement mistake
people
choose
Wrong verb form
chose
bus
only 18%. In 1970 with many raesons of travelers 26% of them pick Correct article usage
the bus
bus
to travels so that's more than other. Moreover
, figure of 1990, bus
it was chosen second in number when compared to car
approxiemately 16% while
number of bike is lower than other with 5%.Submitted by np.napatping on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words travel, foot, car, bus with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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