The graph below shows home heating fuel choice according to the year the house was built. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisions where relevant
The graph above shows home heating fuel
according to
the year the house was built . The graph shows an increasing
in the used Replace the word
increase
electricity
however
the natural gas
percentage
is getting
down.the graph shows that Verb problem
going
the
houses that Change preposition
of the
was
built before 1950 more than Change the verb form
were
a
half of them Correct article usage
apply
are using
natural Wrong verb form
use
gas
in addition
nearly 15 percent
of houses Change the spelling
per cent
used
Wrong verb form
use
electricity
. From 1950 to 1969 the percentage
of the
natural Correct article usage
apply
gas
did not changed
Change the verb form
change
however
the electricity
percentage
approximately got
doubled , but from 1970 to 1989 both Verb problem
apply
electricity
and natural gas
were between 30 to 50 percent . On
the years Change preposition
In
between
1990 to Change preposition
apply
2010
Add a comma
2010,
the
natural Correct article usage
apply
gas
and the
Correct article usage
apply
electricity
had the same percentage
which is
approximately 45 Wrong verb form
was
percent
.Change the spelling
per cent
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