The charts show the percentages of family income spent in different categories in South Korea and Singapore in the years 2000 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts show the percentages of family income spent in different categories in South Korea and Singapore in the years 2000 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts show the percentages of family income spent in different categories in South Korea and Singapore in the years 2000 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts give an insight
of
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into
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the categories
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in that
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that
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which
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families in South Korea and Singapore
spend
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spent
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their earnings in 2000 and 2020.
Overall
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, housing became the biggest expanse in both countries,
while
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healthcare costs increased the most. In Singapore in 2000 the biggest part of income was spent on housing, at 34%. Food and other were similar at 27 and 26%. Transport was a mere 10%,
while
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only 3% of the income
were
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spent on health care. 20 years later you can see a few differences in the chart. Housing rose by 6% and now is at 40%, still being the biggest expense. Transport increased from 10% to 20%. The most dramatic drop was in the food
expanses
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expenses
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, decreasing to 16%. Other
category
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categories
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dropped to 18%. Health care only increased by 3%. In 2020 there are some drastic changes.
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to Singapore,
other
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others
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decreased, dropping from 29% to only 7%,
while
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there was a dramatic increase in healthcare, now standing at 18%. Housing decreased to 21%. Food dropped to 20% and transport increased to 25%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.
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