The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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of men and

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who were employed and aged 60-64 in four regimes in the years 1970 and 2000. The units of measurement were given in percentages.

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, the

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of males working superseded that of

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in all the four states given.

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had the highest percentage as far as

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employees were concerned in both the two years

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Belgium had

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lowest percentage. For

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,

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had a large

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working-class females for both years and Belgium had

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employees.

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, male employees were

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to work more in

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was 85% in the year 1970

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in 2000 there were only 19 per cent workers in Belgium.

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the USA had 73% in 1970, there was a decline in the

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of

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in 2000 as there were only 54%. As far as

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were concerned, only

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had 43% and 40% workers in 1970 and 2000 respectively.

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countries

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as the USA,

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and Australia had between 16%-39% of female workers in both 1970 and 2000.