The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.
The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.
Two charts are provided regarding Anthropology undergraduates after they complete school. The pie chart concerns a destination of recruitment, and more than half of them get full-time jobs. The other table shows the salaries they receive for different types of employment.
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the other chart, there are three types of employment, freelance consultants, authority sector, and private companies. Consultants and states have similar percentages in 2 ranges of 25000 to 49999 and 50000 to 74999. It is 5 and 15 per Linking Words
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In conclusion, graduates mostly prefer to have full-time jobs with a high salary range, Use synonyms
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