The graph below shows home heating fuel choice according to the year the house was built. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisions where relevant

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The given line graph illustrates different types of heating fuel for houses

according to

the period in which the house was built.

Overall

, the main

choice

for heating the house is with natural gases, being the most used method over the years,

however

, the highest proportion of

this

type of heating fuel was between 1950 and 1969, after that,

this

choice

started to decrease as the proportion fluctuated.

While

, the electricity

choice

displayed a significant rise over the period given, hitting between 1990 and 2010 the same percentage as the heating fuel with natural gases. It can be seen that

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1950 until 1969

the

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natural gases had the highest ranking with 60% of houses using

this

method of heating. Over

the

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time,

this

choice

has

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fluctuated in the period between 1979 and 1989 to almost 50% and

remaind

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remained

remain

remains

static after that. Meanwhile, electricity before 1950

they

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only had over 10% and over

the

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time displayed an upward trend hitting its peak in 2010 with almost 50% of houses using

the

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electricity heating.

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