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The chart below shows the number of international applicants to the universities of one European country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows the number of international applicants to the universities of one European country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The provided bar chart depicts the
amount
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number
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 of global
applicants
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 from 4 countries (
USA
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,
China
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,
Russia
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 and
Japan
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) to
the
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apply
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one European country's
universities
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university
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throughout
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from
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 2004 to 2008.
Overall
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,
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USA
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the USA
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 and
Japan
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 increased their number of
applicants
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 in general.
China
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's
applicants
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 diminished between these years
while
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Russia
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 had some fluctuations. In 2004,
the
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apply
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most
applicants
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 were from
China
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 with more than 25.000
while
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 other 3
country's
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countries
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 the total number of
applicants
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 was lower than approximately 23.000. In 2005,
China
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 and
Russia
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 decreased,
China
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 to around 22.000 and
Russia
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 diminished to approximately 1.000.
However
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,
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USA
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the USA
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 increased
their
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apply
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the
amount
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number
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 of
applicants
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 to 15.000
while
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Japan
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stay
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stayed
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same
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the same
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 as
last
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 year
like
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at
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 7.000. In 2006,
China
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 and
USA
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 had the same amount of
applicants
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 with around 17.000.
Japan
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 slightly increased to 7.000.
Russia
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 stayed constant. In 2007,
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the Usa
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Usa
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USA
 took the lead from
China
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 with more than 20.000 after
China
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 which stayed same as same as
Russia
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.
Also
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,
Japan
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 continued to their
slight
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a slight
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 increase too. In 2008,
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USA
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the USA
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enhanced
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increased
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 to more than 25.000
applicants
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.
Japan
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 and
Russia
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 rose gradually in 2008.
Russia
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 increased to approximately 3.000
while
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Japan
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 rose to 10.000.
Nevertheless
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,
China
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 declined in 2008 to 15.000.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words applicants, usa, china, russia, japan with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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