The following process diagram shows how greenhouse gases trap energy from the Sun. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown in the diagram.
The given diagram illustrates the way greenhouse gases get energy from the Sun.
Firstly
, photons from the center
of the Solar system Change the spelling
centre
gets
to Earth or Correct subject-verb agreement
get
is
reflected by Correct subject-verb agreement
are
atmosphere
. Some electromagnetic waves stay on our planet, Add an article
the atmosphere
while
a small fraction of it gets trapped by greenhouse gases and remaining
power is radiated to space.
Correct article usage
the remaining
While
ambiance
holds all warmth, when there's no Sun, it needs CO2, which people produce a lot. We generate it mainly through vehicles or burning fossil fuels in factories.
Change the spelling
ambience
Overall
, there are some stages, 2 equipment, which are cars and manufactories, and 2 resources, which are heat from the Sun and carbon dioxide in this
linear process, where both nature and people involve
.Wrong verb form
are involved
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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