The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph depicts data about how many tourists visited Caribbean islands from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
, it can be seen that there is an upward trend in total
travelers
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visiting, where the highest increase in visitors is experienced by the cruise
ships
sector compared with the number of those who are staying on the island.
To begin
with, those who decided to stay on the island
instead
of on cruise
ships
were approximately 0.7 million in 2010.
Then
this
figure doubled and hit 1.5 million in the following two years, remaining the same unchanged until 2017 with a tiny fluctuation in 2016. Turning to
ships
sectors, people who enjoyed holidays on cruise
ships
counted less than 0,5 million in 2010 and rose to 0,5 a year later.
Although
presented a lower figure than the island tourists and experienced a dip in 2012, its guests confirmed an enormous climb counted more than three times
at the end
of the period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ships with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuating trend
  • initially
  • significant increase
  • slight decline
  • momentary setback
  • steady increase
  • minor fluctuations
  • reaching a peak
  • moderate growth
  • notable growth
  • surge in popularity
  • seasonal or yearly factors
  • stagnation
  • growing appeal
  • visitors worldwide
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