The diagrams show a small museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams show a small museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagrams show a small museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given maps illustrate a
museum
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place, which changed from 1990 to 2010.
Overall
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, we can see the facilities which helped people to enjoy the
museum
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have increased; but the vegetation area roughly destroyed.
According to
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the pictures, in 1990, the spaces for cars were really small;
in contrast
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,
this
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zone developed in 2010 owing to the fact the garden which was next to the car park in1990 destroyed and
this
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region was merged with the car park.
In addition
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, in 2010, the garden which was in the north of the
museum
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was the same as in 1990. The graphs demonstrate in 2010 the area of the path had reduced from prior,
while
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the building of the
museum
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was bigger than previous;
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, in 2010, the store room and Entrance which were in the north of the place were the same as in 1990;
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, the shop that was in the centre was combined with the next room and became a massive market;
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, cottage which was near the main road was replaced by Cafe.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words museum with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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