The diagrams show a small museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps illustrate a
museum
place, which changed from 1990 to 2010.
Overall
, we can see the facilities which helped people to enjoy the museum
have increased; but the vegetation area roughly destroyed.
According to
the pictures, in 1990, the spaces for cars were really small; in contrast
, this
zone developed in 2010 owing to the fact the garden which was next to the car park in1990 destroyed and this
region was merged with the car park. In addition
, in 2010, the garden which was in the north of the museum
was the same as in 1990.
The graphs demonstrate in 2010 the area of the path had reduced from prior, while
the building of the museum
was bigger than previous; moreover
, in 2010, the store room and Entrance which were in the north of the place were the same as in 1990; furthermore
, the shop that was in the centre was combined with the next room and became a massive market; additionally
, cottage which was near the main road was replaced by Cafe.Submitted by maryamkazemi968 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words museum with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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