The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants.
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The bar
chart
and pie chart
provide information about the attendance of men
and women
in various evening courses
at an adult education center
in 2009, and the Change the spelling
centre
age
distribution of the participants
, respectively.
Overall
, it is evident that more women
attended the evening courses
than men
, except in the Sculpture
course
, where male participants
outnumbered female participants
. Additionally
, the majority of course
attendees were aged 50 and above.
In the bar chart
, the Language course
had the highest number of female participants
, with 40 women
enrolled, followed by Painting with 30 women
and Drama with 20 women
. In contrast
, the Sculpture
course
had the lowest number of female participants
, with just 5 women
. Among men
, the Painting course
had the highest enrollment, with 25 participants
. This
was followed by the Language course
with 20 men
, and both the Drama and Sculpture
courses
had 10 male participants
each. Interestingly, the Sculpture
course
had double the number of men
compared to women
.
Regarding the age
distribution in the pie chart
, participants
aged 50 and above constituted the largest group, accounting for 42% of the total. This
was followed by those aged 40-49, who made up 26% of the participants
. Those in their 30s represented 16%, while
participants
in their 20s comprised 11%. The youngest age
group, those under 20, accounted for the smallest proportion, at just 5%.
In conclusion, while
women
predominantly attended the evening courses
, men
were more prevalent in the Sculpture
course
. Additionally
, the age
distribution highlighted that the majority of participants
were older adults, particularly those aged 50 and above.Submitted by kamonluck1999 on
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