The maps below show a beachfront area in Australia in 1950 and today Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The maps illustrate the differences in a coastal region in Australia between 1950 and today.
Overall
, the beachfront area undergone
significant development, with the addition of various facilities and the expansion of Add the auxiliary verb
has undergone
underwent
road
and a swimming Correct article usage
the road
pool
.
In 1950, a short road was located at the top of this
area which connected with the city end at the car park. Next to the car park
there was a pavilion where visitors could enjoy the view. Along the roadside, a playground and some dining tables were next to each other. Each side of the beach had a Add a comma
park,
25
Correct your spelling
25-meter
meters
swimming pool
. Moreover
, a Lighthouse was located at the left bottom of the beach.
Time back to now, the most noticeable change is that the road has been extended until the lighthouse. However
, Along the roadside, the playground has been removed, instead
of another car park. The left side
swimming Add a hyphen
left-side
pool
is
Verb problem
has
expended
its length to 50 Correct your spelling
extended
meters
.In addition
, a restaurant and a surf club are built near the 50
Correct your spelling
50-meter
meters
pool
. Another surf club is located near the 25
Correct your spelling
25-meter
meters
pool
. The lighthouse, pavilion an
former parking lot are the same as before.Correct your spelling
and
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