The table below shows population figure for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050

The table below shows population figure for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050
The diagram below compares the amount of population for different states for 2003 and projected figures for 2025 and 2050.
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, we can see from the data that during these given years only in Italy the indicator becomes smaller
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every thirty years, and in Argentina and Indonesia the number of inhabitants
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increased.
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Republic of Korea
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because the statistics will not change and will remain the same with the indicator, 2003 there were 48 million people, after twenty and fifty degrees the index will be the same. In 2025, there
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about 400 million humanity in total and Indonesia
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the highest indicator with 274 million, in comparison the number of people will have a strong jump in 2050 for Indonesians to 312 populace, if
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with others is considerably lower. In general, the other states are almost more involved in the various statements
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citizens than
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it was in 2003.
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