The table below shows population figure for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050

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The diagram below compares the amount of population for different states for 2003 and projected figures for 2025 and 2050.

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, we can see from the data that during these given years only in Italy the indicator becomes smaller

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every thirty years, and in Argentina and Indonesia the number of inhabitants

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increased.

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Republic of Korea

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clear attractiveness

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because the statistics will not change and will remain the same with the indicator, 2003 there were 48 million people, after twenty and fifty degrees the index will be the same. In 2025, there

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about 400 million humanity in total and Indonesia

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the highest indicator with 274 million, in comparison the number of people will have a strong jump in 2050 for Indonesians to 312 populace, if

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with others is considerably lower. In general, the other states are almost more involved in the various statements

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citizens than

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it was in 2003.

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The table below shows population figure for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050

In some countries, many people do not have enough money to access the internet. Should governments be responsible for ensuring that everyone can get access to the internet?

The number of older people is increasing. Some people think that this will cause problems in their countries; others believe this group is important to society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Many people argue that restaurants should be required to disclose the nutritional information of the dishes they serve. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

instead of requiring primary school students to do experiments themselves, schools should only alllow them to watch experiments demonstrated by teachers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?