Artists
take a
lot
of
money
and opportunity from the government,
while
people
think that with
this
money
they can do useful things to develop cities.
However
, I believe that the
situation
of a
country
and
people
is more important than
artists
. On the one hand,
artists
make the
country
popular. They do a
lot
of concerts, and
people
enjoy it. They do songs or arts that have the possibility to strengthen traditions or the official
language
of the
country
. To make a song or art, they should have
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money
.
For example
,
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singer of Kazakhstan Dimash Qudaibergen made his
country
and the official
language
of his
country
much more popular than expected. Because of his voice, a
lot
of
people
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other countries tried to learn
KazakhChange the article
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language
to sing like Dimash Qudaibergen. But it is
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that he took a
lot
of support from the government before and
after
this
historical event.
However
,
this
is rarely
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which was in Kazakhstan.
On the other hand
, the economic
and Correct word choice
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situation
of Kazakhstan was the lowest. The salary of Kazakhs became less than
last
year. Because of that, the government spent a
lot
of
money
on
artists
; they increased the price of food.
While
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tried to learn
KazakhChange the article
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language
, the Kazakhs suffered from salary and
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of food. Even Kazakhs went on strike. Their goal was to decrease the price of food and increase their salary. In conclusion,
although
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a
lot
of
money
and
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opportunityFix the agreement mistake
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to
artists
,
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money
and
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a
lot
of
opportunityFix the agreement mistake
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to the
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is much better. Because the
situation
of
people
and
country
must be number one.