The map below shows the changes in an American town between 1954 and 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps demonstrate how a
town
in America developed in the years between1954
and 2014.
Correct your spelling
between 1954
Overall
, by looking at the two maps, it is clear that
the town
went from residential and industrial areas to having more commercial units. However
; the north-west of the map appeared to have been relatively unchanged.
The factories in the north-east of the canal were demolished and an airport was developed while
the petrol station in the north-west of the town
remained the same. The park and lake next to the factories in 1954 were removed and a new supermarket and commercial buildings were constructed. Also
, the residential houses in the centre of the area were replaced with commercial buildings.
In the south-west of the town
, the local supermarket which is relocated instead
of the lake was replaced with commercial buildings. The church which is located in the south near the canal was demolished and replaced with a sports stadium. The residential houses In the south-east remained the same. The Canal that is
in the middle of the map remained the same.Submitted by sam on
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