The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.
The diagram illustrates the layout of a particular public library called Central Library, comparing its layout from 20
years
ago to its current state.
Overall
, the library has changed significantly over the past 20 years
and updated all the areas for children and adults.
20 years
ago, once inside from the entrance, people could see two round tables surrounded by chairs. However
, these facilities have been removed. On the right side of the entrance, there used to be an enquiry desk, which has now been replaced by a café. The enquiry desk then
has been turned into an information desk with some self-service machines, where the adult fiction
books
area
is now located above.Further
inside, the lecture room is now situated next to the adult fiction
books
area
, where the children's books
used to be.
On the left side of the entrance, there is now a room for computers, which has replaced the newspapers and magazines. In the middle area
of the left side, people can read some reference books
in it. By contrast
, this
area
was designated for adult fiction
books
20 years
ago. Above
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This
this
area
is now used for children to read their books
, especially fiction
, instead
of its previous function for computer games, CDs, and videos.Submitted by universe.edge on
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