The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The first pie chart illustrates the percentages of Australian household electricity usage, and the second pie graph demonstrates the
greenhouse
gas
emissions caused by this
power.
Overall
, heating home and water
consume the majority of energy
use
in Australia while
the majority of greenhouse
gas
comes from other devices and water
heating.
Nearly a
half of Correct article usage
apply
energy
utilization is used by home heating. Also
, water
worming has a significant proportion of power use
with nearly a third. Other devices make up a small minority of power consumption. Refrigeration, lighting and cooling use
tiny factions of energy
at 7%, 4% and 2% respectively.
Heating produces only 15% of greenhouse
gas
in contrast
with its energy
use
proportion, while
water
heating remains at nearly a third. Other appliances make up a significant proportion of Australian greenhouse
gas
with approximately a quarter. Other categories make up exactly a quarter of gas
emissions combined.Submitted by sam on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words greenhouse, gas, water, energy, use with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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