The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.

The map illustrates Garlsdon

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and the two possible locations for a new supermarket.

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, by looking at the map we see that both supermarkets' sites are accessible by train. The

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will be constructed in the countryside

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with the second

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which will be developed in the city centre. The

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site

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of the supermarket will be located in the north-west of the

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in the rural area. It is 12 km

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Hindon a small

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with 10.000

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. It is located between the railway and the main road. There is a housing in the north of Garlsdon which is close to the

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planned location. The second

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will be located in the city centre and it will be surrounded by the industrial area compared to the

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supermarket place which will be

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in the countryside. The second planned place will be accessible by trains and main roads and it is 16km and 25km to Bransdon and Cransdon

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with 15.000 and 29.000 populations respectively.

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, it is near a housing area which is in the south of the

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.