The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.
The map illustrates Garlsdon
town
and the two possible locations for a new supermarket.
Overall
, by looking at the map we see that both supermarkets' sites are accessible by train. The first
site
will be constructed in the countryside in contrast
with the second site
which will be developed in the city centre.
The first
site
of the supermarket will be located in the north-west of the town
in the rural area. It is 12 km to
Hindon a small Change preposition
from
town
with 10.000 populations
. It is located between the railway and the main road. There is a housing in the north of Garlsdon which is close to the Fix the agreement mistake
population
first
planned location.
The second site
will be located in the city centre and it will be surrounded by the industrial area compared to the first
supermarket place which will be placed
in the countryside. The second planned place will be accessible by trains and main roads and it is 16km and 25km to Bransdon and Cransdon Verb problem
located
a small and big towns
with 15.000 and 29.000 populations respectively. Correct the article-noun agreement
small and big towns
a small and big town
Also
, it is near a housing area which is in the south of the town
.Submitted by sam on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words town, first, site with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
▼