The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features.
This
diagrams
details the whole process Change the determiner
diagram
about
Change preposition
of
salmon
’s life
.
Looking from an overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the whole life
cycle can be divided into 3 steps from little salmon
called fry to adult one about 10 years approximately.
At
the beginning with eggs, they are produced by the adult Change preposition
In
salmon
in the upper river which has slow
speed of water there. Those eggs attach Add an article
a slow
the slow
the
bottom of reeds with small stones nearby. In the subsequent stage , after about 5 or 6 months, they become Change preposition
to the
to
fry with 3 to 8 Fix the infinitive
apply
centimeters
length living in the lower river. Those fry spend about 4 years in Change the spelling
centimetres
such
a fast flowing
area before coming to the smolt. Smolt is the second stage of their Add a hyphen
fast-flowing
life
in which they can grow up to more than 12 cm and prefer to live in the open sea and keep it for 5 years. Finally
, they eventually become to
adult Change preposition
apply
salmon
which has
more than 70 cm Verb problem
are
length
body. At Change preposition
in length
this
stage, salmon
may choose to produce eggs in the upper river and the life
cycle begin
again.Change the verb form
begins
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