The bar graph above shows average earnings in the Republic of Ireland in 5 different years, with projections for the future. Earnings are in US dollars ($). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates a comparison between the average earnings in the Republic of Ireland in five
decade
between 1968 to 2018 . The data are measured in dollars .
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decades
Overall
, the average Linking Words
earning
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earnings
experience
an upward trend throughout the period. The most significant increase was observed in the Replace the word
experienced
last
year .
On the one hand , the initial amount of money Linking Words
had earn
in the Republic of Ireland was less than 8 thousand dollars. Wrong verb form
earned
Moreover
, the figure showed a gradual increase to around 10000$ in 1978 , the data continued to rise to approximately 13000$ in 1988.
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On the other hand
, in 1998 the Linking Words
amount
of average earnings Change the quantifier
number
reach
around 15 thousand dollars before Wrong verb form
reached
decline
next decade by around 2000 . In Wrong verb form
declining
consract
, the figure dramatically increased Correct your spelling
contrast
at the end
of the period and reached a peak at more than 16000$.Linking Words
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