You have recently moved into a new house and have noticed that the garden is in need of some maintenance. Write a letter to your landlord requesting permission to make the necessary improvements.
Dear Mr Johnson,
I am writing
this
letter to you for granting
me permission to improve Change preposition
to grant
garden
. Since IAdd an article
the garden
had
moved ten days back, IUnnecessary verb
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had
observed that Wrong verb form
have
garden
requires a face-lift.
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the garden
Furthermore
, The garden
is almost vandalised. There are no more pavements and the plants have
overgrown now. All Verb problem
are
this
require
cutting and grooming by Correct subject-verb agreement
requires
professional
gardener.
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a professional
Therefore
, I am requesting you to
grant me permission to Fix the infinitive
apply
make
over the Correct your spelling
take
garden
and try to maintain it . I will make sure that garden
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the garden
look
nice and Correct subject-verb agreement
looks
there
is minimal damage Correct word choice
that there
happen
when the work starts.
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Lastly
, I will hire some professional
to mawn grass and cut Fix the agreement mistake
professionals
overgrwon
plants. The planned activity will take one week to complete. if there is disturbance occurs because of Correct your spelling
overgrown
this
. Please inform me, I will make sure it should
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in
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apply
study
.
I look forward to your prompt response on Fix the agreement mistake
studies
this
matter.
Yours sincerely,
Mark woodSubmitted by yash334 on
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coherence cohesion
Consider breaking the text into more clearly defined paragraphs to improve readability. For example, separating the introduction, the current state of the garden, your request for improvements, and your assurances into distinct sections.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph contains a single main idea and flows smoothly into the next. You might incorporate transitional words and phrases to better link your points.
task achievement
Address the landlord by their full name if you know it (e.g., Mr. John Johnson) or use their title and last name (e.g., Mr. Johnson) consistently throughout the letter. It adds a level of respect and professionalism, which is important in formal letters.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is polite and formal, which is appropriate for a letter to a landlord.
task achievement
A clear request for permission to make improvements is evident, and the rationale behind the request is effectively communicated.
coherence cohesion
The letter has a proper closing which reiterates the request and shows a willingness to cooperate with the landlord, maintaining good rapport.