Some people says we should plant trees on free space jn city and town while some says that we should do construction. Do you agree or disagree?

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Few individuals argue that

authorithies

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authorities

should plant

trees

in free spaces in city junctions and

town

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where as

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others believe that space should be utilised for construction. I firmly disagree

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that available space should not be used for constructing or developing anything.

instead

used for

planing

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planting

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trees

Firstly

, Individuals of

current

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generation and people from the past have

spolied

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spoiled

the environment

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through

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actions

such

as deforestation and constructing industries to

maximum

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maximise

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solely profits. which results in ozone layer depletion, reducing oxygen levels and carbon levels are

raising

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rising

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due to

this

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these

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actions

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actions,

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individuals will lack pure

air

breath

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breathe

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and

taking

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take

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polluted

air

into

lungs

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their lungs

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which

causing

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causes

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many

harmfull dieases

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harmful diseases

asthama

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asthma

and respiratory disease. for

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apply

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instant

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instance

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due to

insufficient

trees

delhi

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Delhi

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, pollution levels are raised and a layer of polluted

air

developed

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develops

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the atmostsphere

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atmostsphere

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atmosphere

. which takes

few

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weeks to clear. by breathing

these

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polluted

air

many

children

are affected by critical respiratory diseases.

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, by cutting down

trees

and constructing buildings we are destroying

natural

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habitat of animals, small living creatures and humans. birds in the

air

will have no place to rest.

furthermore

children

will have no place to play under the

trees

and will

loose

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connection with nature. by which, birds

willl

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will

soon

be deteriorate

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from

this

world and

children

will not know what

its

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it's

it is

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like playing under the

trees

. In conclusion, tress

has

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have

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to be planted in free spaces which will

inturn

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in turn

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release pure

air

breath

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breathe

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and we shall have good

healths

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furthermore

natural

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the natural

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habitat of animals will not be destroyed and

children

will

experiance

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experience

nature and

will

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develop connections with

surroundings

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their surroundings

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task achievement

Ensure your introduction clearly presents both viewpoints and your stance more precise. Ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea.

coherence cohesion

Improve paragraph coherence by connecting ideas using more varied and logical transitional phrases.

task achievement

Use specific examples to support your points more effectively. Avoid general statements for a stronger argument.

task achievement

The essay covers both viewpoints and firmly presents the writer's stance.

coherence cohesion

There is a clear introduction and conclusion, aiding the reader's understanding.

task achievement

There are relevant examples, such as the specific mention of pollution in Delhi.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

267 words

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Some people says we should plant trees on free space jn city and town while some says that we should do construction. Do you agree or disagree?

Social networking sites are beneficial on an individual level, but for a community as a whole, it does have a negative impact. Give your opinion.

Nowadays environmental problems are too big to be managed by individual persons or individual countries. In other words, it is an international problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

You recently missed a flight. You think this was the airline’s fault. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, •explain why u believe airline is at fault •describe the impact it had on your journey. •say what you want the airline to do

Doctors recommend that older people should excersice regularly.However many of them do not exercise enough. What are the causes? What can be done to encourage them to exercise?

Cyber insecurity is a rising problem in many countries. What problems does a lack of cyber security cause to Internet users? What solutions can you suggest to solve it?