the diagram below show how drinking water is made using solar power.
The diagram describes how solar power is utilized to make
water
drinkable.
There are a total of four steps in Use synonyms
this
process, beginning with generating sun power and ending with taking the produced Linking Words
water
for consumption.
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Initially
, solar panels capture sunlight and convert it into electricity, which is facilitated by a converter. Linking Words
This
electricity powers a pump located in an underground well, absorbing Linking Words
water
up to the surface.
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Following
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this
stage, the Linking Words
water
is pumped into a series of Use synonyms
water
tanks that are built on a wooden platform and are responsible for storage and Use synonyms
further
processing. Linking Words
Then
, the stored Linking Words
water
undergoes purification to ensure it is suitable for drinking. After purification, the drinkable Use synonyms
water
is channelled through a tube from the drinkable Use synonyms
water
tank to a movable container. At the Use synonyms
last
stage of the process, the system features a tap directly attached to the tube, allowing for convenient dispensing of drinking Linking Words
water
from the main faucet.Use synonyms
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