The table below shows the numbers of visitors to the Ashdown museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The chart shows the results of a survey asking visitors how satisfied they are with their visit during the same two periods.

The table below shows the numbers of visitors to the Ashdown museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The chart shows the results of a survey asking visitors how satisfied they are with their visit during the same two periods.
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The graph illustrates the difference between Ashdown
Museum
's
visitors
and compares if they are happy with the changes that have happened to the
museum
after it has been refurbished.
Overall
,
people
majority of
people
were satisfied or very satisfied the year after refurbishing compared to before refurbishing when the majority were dissatisfied.
First,
the improvement many
people
seem to have with the change as after refurbishing 35% of
people
were very satisfied, and 40% of the
visitors
were satisfied.
On the other hand
, a year before refurbishing just 15% of the
visitors
were very satisfied and 30% of them satisfied with the
museum
leaving the bigger part fro the pie to the dissatisfied tourists representing 40% of the
overall
visitors
.
Conversely
, after refurbishing only 15% of the
visitors
have said that they are dissatisfied with the
museum
.
In addition
, the number of
people
who were very dissatisfied has decreased from 10% before refurbishing to 5% after refurbishing.
To sum up
,
visitors
were happy with the improvement as most of the statistics have changed in a positive way.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
Vocabulary: Replace the words museum, visitors, people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "improvement" was used 2 times.
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