The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevan
The following line graph illustrates the total revenue generated in three bakeries (
Amandine
Bakery
, Mari
Bakeshop
, and Bolo
Cakery) in Calgary over a period of 10 years.
Overall
, it is clear that
the revenue for Bolo
and Amandine
Bakery
increased steadily over the period shown. While
Mari
Bakeshop
had the most sales
in 2000, and in 2010 it had the lowest sales
in comparison to others.
In 2000, the Mari
Bakeshop
earned over $80,000, the figures for Amandine
Bakery
and Bolo
Cakery were considerably lower, at around $60,000 and $20,000 respectively. From 2000 to 2003, the earnings for Amandine
Bakery
plateaued at approximately $55,000, while
the figure for Bolo
Cakery rose steadily to nearly $40,000.
Moreover
, the Mari
Bakeshop
experienced the most bizarre fluctuations throughout the given timeline. Although
,
it had significantly higher Remove the comma
apply
sales
in the beginning as compared to its counterparts, between the years 2005 and 2006, its sales
fell to $60,000. Furthermore
, this
figure continued to fall dramatically, reaching its lowest at $40,000 in 2010.Submitted by shahroz99dev on
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