In some nations,
students
have Use synonyms
jobs
and it is believed as advantageous Use synonyms
that
has positive outcomes. Correct word choice
and
However
, others disagree. I would agree that having Linking Words
Use synonyms
job
for Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
students
is beneficial Use synonyms
Linking Words
while
there Correct word choice
but
is
some drawbacks. Change the verb form
are
This
essay will discuss both ideas.
Linking Words
To begin
with, having Linking Words
jobs
for Use synonyms
students
is essential that they get insights about many things in Use synonyms
the
life. It provides opportunities to prepare Correct article usage
apply
students
for many obstacles they Use synonyms
they
may face in future. Remove the redundancy
apply
Moreover
, through employing in a Linking Words
job
Use synonyms
student's
communication skills will enhanced and they earn money as financial support which is beneficial for teenagers Fix the agreement mistake
students'
that
will be independent financially. Correct pronoun usage
who
For instance
, some of my school friends have a Linking Words
job
in restaurants . They feel proud to Use synonyms
earning
money they support their family and themselves. Wrong verb form
earn
Thus
, it has Linking Words
a
several positive consequences for Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
students
to Use synonyms
having
Change the form of the verb
have
jobs
.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, Linking Words
besides
Linking Words
beneficial
results of having Correct article usage
the beneficial
Use synonyms
job
for Add an article
a job
students
, there are other measures Use synonyms
that
Linking Words
is
vitally deleterious for them. Change the verb form
are
First,
they may feel under pressure and Linking Words
stressed
Change the form of the verb
stress
while
they studying and working simultaneously. Linking Words
Hence
, their school mark may decrease because of Linking Words
immerse
pressure of working. Correct your spelling
immense
Also
, young people should be able to enjoy Linking Words
Linking Words
instead
of working in a Correct pronoun usage
themselves instead
job
because in the future they will likely Use synonyms
to
have less time Fix the infinitive
apply
to
entertainment. Change preposition
for
For example
, I used to play football and Linking Words
hung
out with my friends when I was a student which has favourable impacts on my life.
In conclusion, Wrong verb form
hang
although
I agree that having Linking Words
jobs
for Use synonyms
students
is beneficial Use synonyms
such
as earning money or learning new skills that prepare for Linking Words
further
Linking Words
jobs
, there are some disadvantages. Feeling under stress and Use synonyms
have
not Unnecessary verb
apply
finding
time to enjoy is one of these disadvantages.Verb problem
having
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