In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Some people think it is a brilliant idea and brings a lot of benefits; others, however, deny. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In some nations,

students

have

jobs

and it is believed as advantageous

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has positive outcomes.

However

, others disagree. I would agree that having

job

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for

students

is beneficial

while

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there

is

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some drawbacks.

This

essay will discuss both ideas.

To begin

with, having

jobs

for

students

is essential that they get insights about many things in

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life. It provides opportunities to prepare

students

for many obstacles they

they

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may face in future.

Moreover

, through employing in a

job

student's

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students'

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communication skills will enhanced and they earn money as financial support which is beneficial for teenagers

that

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who

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will be independent financially.

For instance

, some of my school friends have a

job

in restaurants . They feel proud to

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money they support their family and themselves.

Thus

, it has

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several positive consequences for

students

to

having

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jobs

.

On the other hand

,

besides

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results of having

job

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for

students

, there are other measures

that

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vitally deleterious for them.

First,

they may feel under pressure and

stressed

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while

they studying and working simultaneously.

Hence

, their school mark may decrease because of

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pressure of working.

Also

, young people should be able to enjoy

instead

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themselves instead

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of working in a

job

because in the future they will likely

to

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have less time

to

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entertainment.

For example

, I used to play football and

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out with my friends when I was a student which has favourable impacts on my life. In conclusion,

although

I agree that having

jobs

for

students

is beneficial

such

as earning money or learning new skills that prepare for

further

jobs

, there are some disadvantages. Feeling under stress and

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not

finding

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time to enjoy is one of these disadvantages.