The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The diagram below presents the process of creating biofuel which is
ethanol
in
few
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steps starting with energy to make the
out come
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outcome
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ethanol
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, the process starts with
the
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income energy
spisificlly
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specifically
sunlight and carbon dioxide, to create
ethanol
to
prduce
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produce
carbon dioxide again.
firstly
, The first step
requeres
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requires
energy from sunlight and carbon dioxide to use
it
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in plants and trees grow,
Then
Pre-processing to
prduce
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produce
cellulose and
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it to make
suger
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sugar
that is
used to transform
to
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microes
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microbes
micro es
aaded
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and
then
finally
the main outcome
ethanol
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that
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is used in many
diffrent
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different
ways,
for example
: cars, plane، and a truck,
this
continue again in plants and trees grow.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words ethanol with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • procurement
  • raw materials
  • milled
  • surface area
  • fermentable substance
  • enzymes
  • yeast
  • fermentation
  • byproducts
  • isolate
  • purified
  • distillation
  • concentration
  • containers
  • distribution
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