The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The diagram below presents the process of creating biofuel which is
ethanol
in few
steps starting with energy to make the Correct article usage
a few
out come
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outcome
ethanol
Overall
, the process starts with the
income energy Correct article usage
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spisificlly
sunlight and carbon dioxide, to create Correct your spelling
specifically
ethanol
to prduce
carbon dioxide again.
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produce
firstly
, The first step requeres
energy from sunlight and carbon dioxide to use Correct your spelling
requires
it
in plants and trees grow, Correct pronoun usage
apply
Then
Pre-processing to prduce
cellulose and Correct your spelling
produce
using
it to make Wrong verb form
use
suger
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sugar
that is
used to transform to
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into
microes
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microbes
micro es
aaded
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and
then
finally
the main outcome ethanol
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is ethanol
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different
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "that is".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ethanol with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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