You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how energy is produced from coal. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The graph above format how energy
produced
from coal and oxygen.
Add a missing verb
is produced
Overall
the diagram displays that by putting both oxygen and coal in the furnace we will get either Raw syngas or slag then
by using some machines we can get electricity .
After getting the produce
of the furnace which came out from coal and oxygen we can get a slag after putting it into the gas turbine it will move to the heat recovery steam generator Correct your spelling
product
then
we can use the generator and the steam turbine to have our last
goal which is the electricity .
However
we can get Add a comma
However,
a
Raw syngas out of the furnace Correct article usage
apply
in addition
we can do a removel
step that can give us Mercury Sulfur Correct your spelling
removal
also
we can get a
Purified syngas Correct article usage
apply
then
we can use the same operation that we used it
with the slagCorrect pronoun usage
apply
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