The chart below gives information about how families in one country spend their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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shows bar charts the information about weekly Linking Words
spend
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spending
family
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families
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increase
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food
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decrease
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a decrease
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food
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at
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in
is
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has
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increase
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increased
increase
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due to
they eat Linking Words
food
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everday
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every
wich
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which
why
they had Add a missing verb
is why
energay
. Correct your spelling
energy
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,
food
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keep
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keeps
thier
bodies and Correct your spelling
their
wight
in check In Correct your spelling
weight
additon
, if there did not eat their mind would be adverse .
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addition
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, per sent trend for leisure Linking Words
at
2018 Change preposition
in
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increase
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increased
comparison
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in comparison
1968
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to 1968
wich
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which
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a lot of business there most did it to stay Wrong verb form
had
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alive
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busy with Change the verb form
were
the
work to get the money for their life . So , Correct article usage
apply
this
reason why there Linking Words
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was
of
leisure . Change preposition
for
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transport
from 1968 to 2018 there had Use synonyms
a
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apply
littel
changes in the Correct your spelling
little
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trend
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transport
decrease Correct article usage
a transport
at
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in
comparsion
with Correct your spelling
comparison
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increase
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an increase
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transport
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in transport
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2018 ,,,, which why the reason did not Change preposition
in
goes
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go
any where
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anywhere
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there go anywhere and a many of places is due .
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nowadays
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, we could say that a lot of things Correct your spelling
up
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have changed
to
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for
better
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the better
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food
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the
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in the
develop
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developed
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