The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reportung the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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purchasing
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purchased
coffee
and tea in the last
4 weeks in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart. Overall
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of people prefer to go to a Correct article usage
the majority
cafe
to drink coffee
and tea, and little precentages
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percentages
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resident
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residents
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coffee
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the people of Sydney, Melbourne and Hobart went to cafe
to have a cup of Fix the agreement mistake
cafes
coffee
or tea representing nearly between 60% to 65% for
each city. Change preposition
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On the other hand
,just 55% of Brisbane folks went to the cafe
, leaving Adelaide in the last
place when it comes ot
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to
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the cafe
cafe
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cafes
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.
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them
Conversely
, when it comes to purchasing coffee
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themselves
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cities Correct your spelling
metropolitan
prefered
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preferred
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coffee
with percentage
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percentages
that
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between 45% and 55% of these Correct your spelling
varying
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As a result
, between 35% and 45% of the societies sticked
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stuck
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