Test 1: The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The line graph

despicts

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depicts

the

dinamics

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dynamics

of prices with

percentage

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percentages

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for

each

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every

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3 metals per month in 2014.

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, it is evident that the

costs'

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costs

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ratio in copper and zinc are mostly

same

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the same

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at the beginning and end of the

year

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while

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nikel's

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price showed the most dramatic decrease over the same period shown. Looking at the line graph in more detail, the proportion of zinc price had escalated from 1% to 3% before dropping

drasticly

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drastically

to -1% during

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the next

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month

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months

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, until June. A steady decline is observed in the price of copper until June. During the rest of the

year

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, the cost of both

metal

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metals

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changes in a similar

tend

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trend

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, reaching similar figures to the prices at the beginning of the

year

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(copper 1.5%, zinc 2%). Regarding

nickel's

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nickel

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prise,

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prise

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price

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there was

significant

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a significant

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fall from 6% in January to 1% in March, by 5% by followed a fluctuation during

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the next

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month

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months

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until May. The figure decreased dramatically to -3% in May, which

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that

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apply

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is the

least

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lowest

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ratio of the

year

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. In

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the next

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4 months the proportion of nickel prices fluctuated around -2% and

finally

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this

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figure rose to 1%

at the end

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of 2014.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Vocabulary: Replace the words year with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.

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6
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
21
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

197 words

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Test 1: The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

People have diﬀerent views regarding the importance of a building’s function in comparison to its exterior appearance. In my opinion, I agree with the idea that a construction’s purpose should be more highly valued than the appearance for a number of reasons.

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Many families move to different countries. Some people think children can benefit from this, while others consider it is hard for children if families move to a foreign country. Discuss both views and your opinion.