Test 1: The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line graph
despicts
the Correct your spelling
depicts
dinamics
of prices with Correct your spelling
dynamics
percentage
for Fix the agreement mistake
percentages
each
3 metals per month in 2014. Change the determiner
every
Overall
, it is evident that the costs'
ratio in copper and zinc are mostly Change noun form
costs
same
at the beginning and end of the Correct article usage
the same
year
, while
nikel's
price showed the most dramatic decrease over the same period shown.
Looking at the line graph in more detail, the proportion of zinc price had escalated from 1% to 3% before dropping Change the capitalization
Nikel's
drasticly
to -1% during Correct your spelling
drastically
next
4 Correct article usage
the next
month
, until June. A steady decline is observed in the price of copper until June. During the rest of the Fix the agreement mistake
months
year
, the cost of both metal
changes in a similar Fix the agreement mistake
metals
tend
, reaching similar figures to the prices at the beginning of the Correct your spelling
trend
year
(copper 1.5%, zinc 2%).
Regarding nickel's
Change noun form
nickel
Add a comma
prise,
prise
there was Correct your spelling
price
significant
fall from 6% in January to 1% in March, by 5% by followed a fluctuation during Correct article usage
a significant
next
2 Correct article usage
the next
month
until May. The figure decreased dramatically to -3% in May, which Fix the agreement mistake
months
that
is the Correct pronoun usage
apply
least
ratio of the Correct word choice
lowest
year
. In next
4 months the proportion of nickel prices fluctuated around -2% and Correct article usage
the next
finally
, this
figure rose to 1% at the end
of 2014.Submitted by i.nureddinn on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.
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