The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph describes the different reasons why
people
moved to the capital
city
of a specific country
during
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between
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2000 and 2015.
Overall
,
people
with all four different arguments for moving to the capital
city
grew between 2005 and 2010. But job opportunities seem to be the main driver for
people
to move to the
city
.
However
, a downward trend is noticed between 2010 and 2015 for employment.
While
people
moving for jobs falls from around 92000 to 88000, education shows a striking rise in
this
period of time. With almost 55000 students in 2010, study is a big reason to move with a magnificent 88000 students in 2015. Moving to the capital
city
for family and/or friends seems to be less popular. Growing a bit between 2005 and 2010, 15000 and 22000 respectively. Less
adventure seeking
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adventure-seeking
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people
move to the
city
, noticing a steady rise during the whole period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, city with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.

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