The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph describes the different reasons why

people

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moved to the capital

city

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of a specific country

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2000 and 2015.

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people

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with all four different arguments for moving to the capital

city

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grew between 2005 and 2010. But job opportunities seem to be the main driver for

people

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to move to the

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, a downward trend is noticed between 2010 and 2015 for employment.

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moving for jobs falls from around 92000 to 88000, education shows a striking rise in

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period of time. With almost 55000 students in 2010, study is a big reason to move with a magnificent 88000 students in 2015. Moving to the capital

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for family and/or friends seems to be less popular. Growing a bit between 2005 and 2010, 15000 and 22000 respectively. Less

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people

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move to the

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, noticing a steady rise during the whole period.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, city with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

150 words

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The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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