The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four European countries between 1990 and 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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theft
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per
thousand
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vehicles
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in European countries
such
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as Great
Britian
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Britain

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, Sweden, France and
Canada
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for a decade from
year
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the year

It appears that the article usage before year is incorrect. Consider making a change.

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1990 to 1999.
Overall
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, No of
cars
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car

It seems that cars may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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of
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apply

It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.

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theft
Fix the agreement mistake
thefts

It seems that theft may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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in Great Britain stands at
highest
Correct article usage
the highest

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and cars
got
Verb problem
apply

There may be a verb use issue here.

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stolen in
Canada
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stands at
bottom
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the bottom

The noun phrase bottom seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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in
comparision
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comparison

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with other countries.
Firstly
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, most
vehicles
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were stolen in Britain in
span
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the span
a span

The noun phrase span seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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of ten years, and around an average of 18
thefts
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per
thoushand
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thousand

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vehicles
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. and
lowest
Correct article usage
the lowest

It seems that there is an article usage problem here.

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Use synonyms
thefts
Correct quantifier usage
number of thefts

It seems that quantifier use may be incorrect here.

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were
Unnecessary verb
apply

The verb were appears to be unnecessary here.

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recorded in
Canada
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Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

that
Correct pronoun usage
which

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is around an average of 6
thefts
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per
thousand
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

vehicles
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

.
Secoundly
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Secondly

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. In France
on
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apply

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an average of 7.5
vehicles
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are
theft
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per
thousand
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and Sweden stands at second place with no of
thefts
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gradually increasing from 6
vehicles
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per
thousand
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to approximately 14 per
thousand
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from year 1990 to 1999. In conclusion,
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Correct article usage
the thefts
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Correct article usage
the thefts

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thefts
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theft
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rate has seen
reduction
Correct article usage
a reduction

It seems that there is an article usage problem here.

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for
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in

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countries
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Canada
Change preposition
like Canada

It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.

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, France and Britain from 1990 to 1999.
Linking Words
Linking Words
however
Add a comma
however,

It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase however. Consider adding a comma.

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theft
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

are
Change the verb form
is

The verb are does not seem to agree with the subject. Consider changing the verb form.

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gradually increasing
for
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in

It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.

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Sweden

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Vocabulary: Replace the words theft, thousand, vehicles, canada, thefts with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "stands" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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