The maps below show the changes that took place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 2000 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. The maps illustrate how the Templeton resort experienced some developments from 2000 to 2013.
The two maps illustrate the development of the Templeton seaside
resort
between 2000 and 2013.
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Overall
, significant changes occurred over the period, including the construction of new buildings, a reduction in green areas, and substantial developments in transportation infrastructure.
By 2013, in the northwest part of the Linking Words
resort
, three blocks of flats had replaced a large building near the lake. Across the river, a new airport was constructed adjacent to the school building. To the east of the school, new houses were built, Use synonyms
while
a house on the opposite side of the school was demolished. Linking Words
Additionally
, a bridge connected the eastern and western parts of the Linking Words
resort
across the empty field.
In the southern part of the Use synonyms
resort
, a new supermarket and additional blocks of flats replaced the former houses. Across the river, the housing area and woodlands were replaced by a factory. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the railway station was extended along the coastline, connecting the eastern and western parts of the Linking Words
resort
. Use synonyms
Lastly
, a ferry service was introduced in 2013, providing easier access to the entire Linking Words
resort
area.Use synonyms
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