The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram below illustrates the entire process
for
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recycling
plastic
bottles
, from the moment people throw away garbage to the final products made using
recycling
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material. The process consists of 9
steps
. The first three
steps
involve the disposal of garbage in the specific rubbish bins and the subsequent sorting of
bottles
that can and cannot be recycled at the recycling centre. The fourth and fifth
steps
concern the processing of
plastic
bottles
. They are first compressed into blocks and
then
crushed.
After
this
, all the pieces of the crushed blocks are submerged in water, ready to be processed in the next step. The sixth and seventh
steps
involve the production of raw materials through the process of heating
plastic
pellets derived from the pieces of
plastic
bottles
submerged in water.
Finally
, the
last
step leads to the production of end products and the initiation of the recycling cycle once again.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • collection
  • recycling centers
  • transported
  • recycling plant
  • sorted
  • cleaned
  • impurities
  • shredded
  • flakes
  • melted
  • pellets
  • raw material
  • manufacturing
  • containers
  • clothing
  • recycling loop
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