The line graph below shows the population size, brith rate and the death rate of England and wales from 1700 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the population size, brith rate and the death rate of England and wales from 1700 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph illustrates the
rate
of
birth
,
death
and the
population
size between 1700 and 2000 in two countries.
Overall
, it can be seen that there was a dramatic increase in
population
size and the
birth
rate
experienced an upward trend.
On the other hand
, the
death
rate
was all about downward. Looking at the
population
size in more detail,
it is clear that
in the year 1700
population
growth was nearly 2 million (m). The next 100 years nearly remained steady
then
the growth skyrocketed. In 2000 It reached its peak of about 50m . Turning to the
birth
and
death
rate
, It is evident that. In the year 1700, the
rate
of
birth
and
death
respectively was 30 and 27 people in every 1000 people. From 1750 to 1950 both rates experienced a decreasing trend. In the final year 2000, the
birth
rate
was 35 and the
death
rate
was 20 in every 1000 people.
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