The maps below show information about the change of Riverage college 30 years ago and now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The given diagram illustrates information about Riverage College and its change after three decades.
Overall
, College
has undergone a considerable transformation compared to its map 30 years ago.
First of all, the sports hall and terrace still keep constantly about its location and area meanwhile, the flower, which is situated between two of the above places, was removed, making way for the step.
In the middle building, which is divided into three rooms. The library does not have a change, which is located between others. Correct article usage
the College
In contrast
, the office and cafe have been constructed at two other locations, which were altered for the refectory and common room
30 years ago.
In the next building, there are three rooms instead
of the five ones in the past. Four offices have been gathered in the art room
. The reception is in front of the art room
, which is similar to its location in the past. Additionally
, this
building has been expanded to create a new room
, which is a music room
. Finally
, the car park has been now replaced by the trees.Submitted by duongntt.tld on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words room with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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