The graph below shows consumers' average annual expenditure on cell phone, national and international fixed-line and services in America between 2001 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows consumers' average annual expenditure on cell phone, national and international fixed-line and services in America between 2001 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph indicates customers’ average annual spend on smartphones, national and international
fixed-line
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and
services
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in America over a
period
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of 9 years.
It is clear that
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the mean yearly expenditure
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phones increased between 2001 and 2010.
By contrast
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, national
fixed-line
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services
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had a decreasing amount of spending. The international
fixed-line
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services
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remained relatively stable. Cell phone
services
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had a negligible amount (200) at the beginning of the
period
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,
then
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it rose to approximately 750
USD
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at the end
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of the
period
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.
Conversely
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, National
fixed-line
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service was the main expenditure for users which was 700
USD
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, but it
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ended
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at 400
USD
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in 2010. The mean annual spending of international
fixed-line
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services
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was half that of cell phone
services
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and remained at 300
USD
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for the rest of the
period
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. In 2006, both cell phone
services
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and national
fixed-line
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services
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had the same amount of expense at 500
USD
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. International
fixed-line
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services
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saw only a small rise to approximately 330
USD
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by 2003,
then
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dropped to 300
USD
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words fixed-line, services, period, usd with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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