Part 1. The bar chart shows the percentage of school children learning to play different musical instrument in 2005, 2010 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart
illustrate
the proportion of school children learning to play piano, guitar, drums and violin through the years 2005,2010 and 2015. Change the verb form
illustrates
Overall
, the highest percentage of children who learned guitar in
2015, Add a missing verb
was in
while
the lowest percentage was violin in the same year.Submitted by moza53aljabri on
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