The table below gives information about the daily cost of water per person in five different countries. (Figures are based on the minimum daily requirement per peron of 11.5 litres.)
The table illustrates the amount of water
cost
each person should allocate in one day, compared to the five countries.
Overall
, it is clear that
Tanzania and Uganda take a large cost
, which account
for high percentages in daily wages. Change the verb form
accounts
In contrast
, the UK
and the UK
's water prices are cheaper and the proportions of daily wage
are quite low.
Focusing on Tanzania and Uganda, Fix the agreement mistake
wages
daily
Add an article
the daily
cost
per person is quite high. The former's cost
is 6.4 cents
, which accounts for 5.7% of average
daily Correct article usage
the average
wage
. Similarly
, Uganda's people are required to pay 3.2% of total
daily Correct article usage
the total
wage
, which is 4.1 cents
.
Turning to the remains, Pakistan's figure is 1.76 cents
, followed by the UK
at 1.3 cents
and the US at 0.85 cents
. For a proportion of average daily wage
, however
, there are clearly differences in these countries. While
Pakistan's number is 1.1%, the UK
accounts for 0.013% and the lowest number is seen in the US at only 0.006%.Submitted by nao.bb0820 on
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cost, uk, wage, cents with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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