The maps below show how the town of Harborne changed from 1936 to 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show how the town of Harborne changed from 1936 to 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps below illustrate the transformation of a
town
called Harborne between 1936 and 2007. From an
overall
perspective, it is evident that the
town
witnessed significant changes, cutting down a certain number of plants
while
extending the residential area and opening more facilities for recreational activities. From 1936 to 2007, in the northeastern part of the
town
, the region around the river was developed into a residential area. The number of trees located in the northwest dropped significantly during the 71-year period. In the centre of the
town
, they built a new shopping centre and the post office, bank, and library remained. The sweet shop and butcher were both destroyed to make way for a supermarket. Opposite the post office, the flower shop was removed and replaced by a travel agency which is right next to the bank. The bike path in the southwest was redesigned as a road. In the southeast, the government offices were converted into a museum, and the adjacent farmland was turned into a golf course. The bike path in the southeastern part of the area was redesigned as a road. In the southeast, the government offices were converted into a museum, and the adjacent farmland was turned into a golf course.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words town with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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