The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

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The illustration depicts how rapid the process of making

noodles

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is.

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, the 8-step process begins with placing flour from storage into

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the mixer

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and ends with finished

noodles

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with various sealing and vegetables.

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is achieved by numerous technologies accompanied by rollers which keep the process going.

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, flour from the storage silos is moved into

mixer

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the mixer

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where it mixes with oil and water,

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then

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and then

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its transported on dough sheets via rollers to

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the

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next step. After that, it is divided into small pieces by dough strips.

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this

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mixture is conveyed into

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noodles

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noodle

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discs by a special device. At step 6

noodles

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discs are cooked with oil and dried,

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they are placed into cups.

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, cups are moved into a box where they are filled with vegetables and spices.

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the final step,

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substance is

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labelled and sealed, and transmitted to a place where all the ready

noodles

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are assembled.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words noodles with synonyms.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

154 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

manufacturing process
mixing ingredients
dough preparation
sheeting
steaming
cutting techniques
dehydration
deep-frying
cooling system
packaging
quality control
production line
mass production
food preservation
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The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

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Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibility. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Employers should give their staff at least four-weeks’ holiday a year to help employees get better at their jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that outdoor activities are more beneficial for children’s development than playing computer games. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (21/08)