The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.
The illustration depicts how rapid the process of making
noodles
is.
Overall
, the 8-step process begins with placing flour from storage into mixer
and ends with finished Add an article
the mixer
a mixer
noodles
with various sealing and vegetables. This
is achieved by numerous technologies accompanied by rollers which keep the process going.
Firstly
, flour from the storage silos is moved into mixer
where it mixes with oil and water, Add an article
the mixer
a mixer
then
its transported on dough sheets via rollers to Correct word choice
and then
a
next step. After that, it is divided into small pieces by dough strips. Correct article usage
the
Then
, this
mixture is conveyed into noodles
discs by a special device.
At step 6 Fix the agreement mistake
noodle
noodles
discs are cooked with oil and dried, then
they are placed into cups. Then
, cups are moved into a box where they are filled with vegetables and spices. On
the final step, Change preposition
In
this
substance is then
labelled and sealed, and transmitted to a place where all the ready noodles
are assembled.Submitted by dnm.best on
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