The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.
The illustration depicts how rapid the process of making
noodles
is.
Overall
, the 8-step process begins with placing flour from storage into
mixer
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and ends with finished
noodles
with various sealing and vegetables.
This
is achieved by numerous technologies accompanied by rollers which keep the process going.
Firstly
, flour from the storage silos is moved into
mixer
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where it mixes with oil and water,
then
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its transported on dough sheets via rollers to
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next step. After that, it is divided into small pieces by dough strips.
Then
,
this
mixture is conveyed into
noodles
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discs by a special device. At step 6
noodles
discs are cooked with oil and dried,
then
they are placed into cups.
Then
, cups are moved into a box where they are filled with vegetables and spices.
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the final step,
this
substance is
then
labelled and sealed, and transmitted to a place where all the ready
noodles
are assembled.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufacturing process
  • mixing ingredients
  • dough preparation
  • sheeting
  • steaming
  • cutting techniques
  • dehydration
  • deep-frying
  • cooling system
  • packaging
  • quality control
  • production line
  • mass production
  • food preservation
  • convenience food
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